Lights [working title]

[2qewl4u]

That's so how I imagined her. but I kinda imagined her a bit like Naomi off 90210 for some reason. The look, obviously, not the character.

[gothika]

:3
awesome. but I have to say it feels a bit rushed..but I guess that was the whole point?
TBH it felt like Twilight but after I read it more it didn't feel like that one bit.

[Majick]

I meant to read this today ... but I didn't have the time, and now i'm too tired again >__<  GAH!  Someone PM me the link to the story, so I'll see it and remember tomorrow XD

[bobert26]

My sister has a friend named Shayla so I picture her like her, lol.

[Cassie]

I'll post one more chapter, after that I think I'm gonna stop as it's not really holidng anyone's interest so far. Sowwie guys. =\

(16-03-2010 03:06 AM)[removed] link Wrote::3
awesome. but I have to say it feels a bit rushed..but I guess that was the whole point?
TBH it felt like Twilight but after I read it more it didn't feel like that one bit.

Whatever yo do, don't go down the Colden/Adalyn route. That's not the shp I'm going for. If I were to continue the story you'd see a couple of Ships played out. But Colden/Adalyn aren't no Edward/Bella.

[gothika]

D:
WHY AREN'T YOU POSTING ANYMORE? -ends yelling-

[Cassie]

I want to, but if the story isn't doing it for anyone there's no point. I will post Chapter 3 and see how that goes, after that I'll think about Chapter 4. =P

[Majick]

I just read it.

WOW.  LOVE IT!  Seriously :3  Can't wait to see more ^_^

[Cassie]

Chapter Three will probably be my last chapter, we'll see. Thanks so much Jen.

[Majick]

Awh, I hope not ;__;