Lights [working title]

[serp3821]

I got so disappointed when it ended Cassie
I want to read more

I've actually written a story. I stopped though. My friends read it and they loved it. they want me to finish it but I'm still waiting for my teacher to read it so I can go on. Like he needs to make corrections and tell me what I need and what I need to take away. The story is called "Truth Cup" or something like that. It takes place in Ireland

anyways, your story is good Cassie.

[Cassie]

That's great. Karma of course. =P

Anyone got any comments on any particular parts or questions or criticism?

[Munsta]

D'you want it moved?

[Cassie]

Not yet. I'll keep it here until I'm ready to post Chappy Two if that's OK. =)
Then I'll PM you a request to move it.

[Munsta]

Mkaykayssss

[2qewl4u]

This is how I imagine Adalyn to look:



Without the glasses.   Meekakitty!

[bobert26]

The only criticism I would have is that in the beginning, the dialogue between Shay and Addy as well as the dialogue between Addy and her dad seemed a bit stiff, you know? Other than that, it was good

[serp3821]

(11-03-2010 12:16 AM)αнмє∂ι¢ιηє link Wrote:This is how I imagine Adalyn to look:



Without the glasses.   Meekakitty!

agreed.

[bobert26]

I pictured her a bit like Nicole Kidman when she had red hair and younger

[2qewl4u]

Oh yes I was kinda shocked when she slapped her dad xD