I NEED ENGLISH ESSAY HELP: 10th GRADE GLOBAL ISSUES FINAL PAPER

[serp3821]

I need help with my honors English class essay.
The essay includes:
Genocide in Darfur
U.S. Anit-Muslim/Arab Sentiment Post 9/11
Gender Discrimination Muslim nations
Immigration Discrimination in Europe

All I need help is in an intro for my essay. I don`t know how to begin...

If you need more info about this essay, here it is:

"In a well-organized essay taking the approach of the University Declaration of Human Rights, research and outline the following current issues challenging our global society. In addition to a clear outline of each issue, be sure to propose resolutions for each of these current global issues."

I already did my research, all I need like I said is help with my intro...

[b-rad]

What are the "Following Issues" ?

[serp3821]

Genocide in Darfur
U.S. Anit-Muslim/Arab Sentiment Post 9/11
Gender Discrimination Muslim nations
Immigration Discrimination in Europe

[b-rad]

Take a Look Around This Room. It looks peaceful. This school? Slightly less Peaceful. This Town/City? Even Less.  Now look at the world. It is riddled with war, discrimination, and other tragedies. Today, I would like to address my views on some of the many Global Issues. I have worked to make sure my facts are correct. I would like to discuss Genocide in Darfur,U.S. Anit-Muslim/Arab ,Sentiment Post 9/11, Gender Discrimination Muslim nations, and Immigration Discrimination in Europe. Let's start with (Whatever subject was first.)


Not much...  Hope it helped though XD

[serp3821]

somewhat it did help but not exactly. You have gramar errors that need to be addressed.
But thank you!

[b-rad]

YEah, I just thought you needed one quick

Its just for an idea though.  Because I have NO IDEA what any of those things are XD

[serp3821]

oh.............

well that explains it

anyone else can help me?

[Tom Simkins]

The world is not a peaceful place.  There is a lot of violence and arguments in the world.  From individual murders, to political debates, to large scale genocides, the violence and arguments affect us all.  A few of the most major arguments in the modern world would be the Genocide in Darfur, the U.S. Anti-Muslim/Arab Sentiment Post 9/11, the Gender Discrimination Muslim nations, and the Immigration Discrimination in Europe.  Even though the problems listed may be major problems in the world, there are still many ways to fix them.

Here is an outline for an opening paragraph:
1. Attention Grabbing Statement (AGS)
2. Background of topic, narrow down to your thesis statement.
3. Thesis Statement (If argumentative, take side here)

Your concluding paragraph should be similar to the first, but in opposite order.

Note: Your AGS could be a short story, quote, fact, or anything that jumps out at the reader.

Hope this helps .

PS:  DO NOT USE THE WORDS I, ME, MYSELF, ect. IN ANY ESSAY (Unless it is a reflective essay)

[serp3821]

too late, i did my essay successfully in time!

so thanks everyone!