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Re: Lights [working title] - serp3821 - 10-03-2010 11:58 PM

I got so disappointed when it ended Cassie
I want to read more

I've actually written a story. I stopped though. My friends read it and they loved it. they want me to finish it but I'm still waiting for my teacher to read it so I can go on. Like he needs to make corrections and tell me what I need and what I need to take away. The story is called "Truth Cup" or something like that. It takes place in Ireland Tongue

anyways, your story is good Cassie.

Re: Lights [working title] - Cassie - 11-03-2010 12:04 AM

That's great. Wink Karma of course. =P

Anyone got any comments on any particular parts or questions or criticism? Smile

Re: Lights [working title] - Munsta - 11-03-2010 12:06 AM

D'you want it moved?

Re: Lights [working title] - Cassie - 11-03-2010 12:08 AM

Not yet. I'll keep it here until I'm ready to post Chappy Two if that's OK. =)
Then I'll PM you a request to move it.

Re: Lights [working title] - Munsta - 11-03-2010 12:08 AM

Mkaykayssss Wink

Re: Lights [working title] - 2qewl4u - 11-03-2010 12:16 AM

This is how I imagine Adalyn to look:

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Without the glasses. Tongue  Meekakitty!

Re: Lights [working title] - bobert26 - 11-03-2010 12:17 AM

The only criticism I would have is that in the beginning, the dialogue between Shay and Addy as well as the dialogue between Addy and her dad seemed a bit stiff, you know? Other than that, it was good Smile

Re: Lights [working title] - serp3821 - 11-03-2010 12:19 AM

(11-03-2010 12:16 AM)αнмє∂ι¢ιηє link Wrote:This is how I imagine Adalyn to look:

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Without the glasses. Tongue  Meekakitty!

agreed.

Re: Lights [working title] - bobert26 - 11-03-2010 12:21 AM

I pictured her a bit like Nicole Kidman when she had red hair and younger Tongue

Re: Lights [working title] - 2qewl4u - 11-03-2010 12:28 AM

Oh yes I was kinda shocked when she slapped her dad xD